Monday, April 13, 2009

Baseball

When you come up to bat you get nervous
While they pitch to you, you think how it
is hard to hit when the ball is coming at
you at almost 100 miles per hour, you swing
as hard as you can, you might hit or you might
miss but if you hit you feel real good, then you
hope there is no catch by the outfielders, but
then it is a homerun, you get happy and you
look at your team as they shout out good one
ya we won , you might score your self or if
there are bases loaded you could score more
points when you score a homerun, then you
go to the bench where your team is at and
they start screaming at you and saying good
job were glad to have you on the team then you
get all happy as you sit down and you see your
teammate hit and you just sit as you are happy

7 comments:

  1. I like that u used one of ur favorite sports as ur insperation

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  2. NiiC3.... iiT WASz PR33TY qOOd

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  3. nice work x-best friend i liked your poem alot you your talent and you will become a baseball player.



    Tony Ayala

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  4. good peom i liked it now i know why u like baseball so much

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  5. good story luis i liked it keep up the good work

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  6. nice and it rhymed just one part in there that didnt

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