Monday, March 23, 2009

The Secret

It was my best friends deepest, darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep. He said it was about him. I said what’s going on, he said nothing much it just that……. That…. I’m going to the hospital. Then I said fore what, then he said because of attempt of suicide. Then I told him you tried to kill your self and he said yes. I told him why. He said because him and his mom and dad are always fighting and when he is arguing with his mom his dad always goes on his moms side. After we finish arguing or even during the argument my dad always ends up beating me up. I stood quit thinking to my self. Then I told him that is not a reason to try and kill your self you could at least try to fix things out with your family. He said well at least I’m going to be out of there way. So the next day at school he was not there so I was worried. Then after school I went to his house. When I knocked on the door his mom opened the door and said he left about an hour ago. I asked do you know where he was going and she said, he said he was going to go far and kill him self.

So I went looking for him but he was no ware to be found. So I kept on looking and looking. Then I herd some one say why am I living there is no purpose to live. So I checked and it was him. So I looked at him and he said how did you find me and I told him I know where to find my best friend. So then the next day he went to school and I remembered that his mom said he was going to kill him self. So after school I went home and I told my mom that he was going to kill him self. So my mom said what are we going to do and I said I don’t know. So then later that day I went to his house to play some video games and I told him don’t kill your self and he said how do you know about that and I told him that his mom told me. The he said that old hag always tells my business. So then I asked him who else know about all of this besides your mom and dad and me, he said there’s only one more person and I said who, he said his name was Tony. So I went up to Tony which was another one of my best friends and said so what are we going to do and then he said about what and I said about our friend. Then he said who I said David. So then we went to his house and we started to talk. Then we got him to talk. We told him not to do it because he was a good friend and it would be hard to loose a good friend.

So then we got him not to kill him self so everyone was happy. Then we went to his parents and we got them fixed up and there whole family happy and they said thanks Luis and Tony.

6 comments:

  1. good story but atthe end of the first part how is his mom going to let him go far away and kill him self

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  2. it was good but cruz has a point.. and the end change it because its kind off fun.. we got him not to kill him self so everyone was happy lol

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  3. IT WAS GOOD LUIS I LIKED IT DONT FIX ANYTHING JUST LEAVE IT DONT LISTB=EN TO NONE OF THEMM LOL

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  4. shut up....................... u fix it rigth now mister

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  5. Wow nice story was David the who was going to kill himself
    i got kind of confused just
    change some little things so other people
    don't get confused with it
    OK

    Kepp it up

    Ernie

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